[Ebook] ➫ The Eyes That Moved ➪ Rachelle M.N. Shaw – Motyourdrive.co.uk

10 thoughts on “The Eyes That Moved

  1. says:

    A classic horror short The prose is clean and creepy, establishing setting and tone and characterization early on I appreciated the refreshing, modern language, and I especially liked the fact that we didn t necessarily have to like the characters in order to empathize with them.However, I did feel like the view spoiler description gave a bit too much away, given the shortness of the piece Since it is horror, readers already pick up the book with some expectation or another In this case, it would have been better to leave to the imagination than otherwise hide spoiler

  2. says:

    Glad I finally caught up with this What a delightfully creepy story I was completely taken in by the world the protagonist lives in, and devastated by the twist Looking forward to 2

  3. says:

    Hello Rachel There was not enough spooky tension, dim terror, once Kendra starts to change into a doll and the boy reveals who he is and what he has been doing for so long and why I understand that this is a short tale, and it s rather good though predictable as we know Kendra kept a dolls shoe on her pocket and then enters the room at that particular and crucial time the story could gain another level of juice if things could be terrifying and shivering for Kendra as she changes I have enjoyed your writings very much Good rhythms for you

  4. says:

    Classic quick horror story, the kind you would tell in a dark room with a flashlight pointed to your face.Simple and effective with a theme that was not the most original but was explored in an enjoyable way It would have benefited of being a bit longer and instead of having the usual monolog of exposition on its climax maybe have some flashbacks in order to let the reader peace the story by himself That way we would have learnt about some key characters that were just mention briefly.Despite that was enjoyable and would recommend to any horror fan.

  5. says:

    Too shortI did enjoy it but it was way too short The characters were not fully fleshed out and the whole plot could have been detailed It has enough potential for a good scary story.

  6. says:

    Not quite for meFirst off, I will say that I believe it was written well Secondly, it was extremely short and that was okay too With that being said, I did expect something. I just didn t get it.

  7. says:

    Spooky Be careful when you slip out at night Rachelle Shaw creates an environment suitably spooky for her characters Kendra and her new friend, Adam, encounter than they anticipated At least than one of them anticipated Well done

  8. says:

    Really neat keep you on you,re toes story Am looking forward to reading the next in line.

  9. says:

    It s okay.It s okay You can kind of guess what s going to happen rather quickly, and it isn t overly original, but it isn t bad either.

  10. says:

    WowThis is a short but great horror story Rachelle M N Shaw has a new fan You need to be careful who you think is a friend Read this one , you won t regret it.

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